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Old 09-16-03, 01:30 AM   #3
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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1st off....isnt your crew IJL...the title say IJS...but whatever
ima be a little harsh on ya 2 so you can elevate quick...your crew has to be the best...

Syntext
really REALLY liked it... the flow was nice and it hit hard just like pledge... great drop kid

Pledge
liked your verses....they had a good level of emotion... the flow was simple but thats a good thing for this kind of drop... vocab could have been better...sides that good drop

Both
MAIN PROBLEM...the 2 if you had nothing to do with each others lines... it looked like this was just bars ya both spit then put then together... if for example you went off pleadge...then syn would have described being shot on the highway...an angel on his boys shoulder...with ya skills that could have been ill

my 2 cents...take how you want
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