well camaracs 1st post says just about everything i wanted to say...and things i didnt want to

Back up fast complex thoughts ready eat flesh and devour ya ass...ready to castrate ya ass..on a rampage to seek out and damage ya ASS///

sorry dog...ass 3x... you could have done much better here

i liked the 2nd verse more than the 1st... over all i agree with everyone... the structure (bar length) has to be fixed a little... up the vocab a notch and your good

up up, way up