this was dope i was feeling the first verse more than the second both came correct lyrically just the first had more of an interesting flow and it seemed more real. no hate just my opinion. overall the piece lacked nothing seems like you watered down your vocab for better flow. i liked this keep it ill dawg.

check my piece if you get a chance
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79942