Yo! you made me cry man... lol... hahahaha....
Oh shit, good drop man, it had heart... and there was some good metas up in there... decent flow... not much on vocab, but fuck it... deep pieces like this usually ain't got that... thas cool... as long as you get your point across... and you succeded at that... didn't make the shit too long, that was cool... even though I know you may have alot more to say about that man...

"And now i'd like to welcome you in, to see the new that place i live in-
no, its not a new house, it's the new perspective that i've been given\"

"There are some i this world that say, words are like nails in a fence-
you can put them in and take them back, but they will always leave the dents"

^thas some poetry right there man... those lines stood out for me...
Keep dropping man...

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