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Old 09-16-03, 11:34 AM   #13
Rappad
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ok let's try a breakdown shall we?

this bitch is a pussy
cant get pussy so he eats carpet
not metaphorically he actually eats carpet
dicks a ryder, hes a pussy carpet eatin fake ryder
thugzdontcry, though u will wen i make u die
and make u fly through the air like an aeroply[ane]

^^Let's see
line 1=wack
line2=gay
line 3=no flow, gay.
line 4=wack.
lline 5=aeroply????lol

Overall=wackest verse I've ever seen 0.5/10 i give you half a point for trying, lol.

Dont talk shit u so bad i dont even know why i waste this spit,//
Herbs,fags,homo's,pathecic catagories were u fittin in perfect//
U aint big u a fukkin little fake ignorant bug wit a blue smurf-neck//

^^pretty good flow here although not a hard punch.

U a fukkin nerd no friends u socially disturbed and that is life word//

^^lol, laugh points.

Fo real u one eleven, ..couldnt come close to ill suckin dick 24/7//

^^ok finisher, kinda blah.

Overall-bad verse, but you dont need more then this to win.3/10

Punches-thug
Flow-thug
Wordplay-thug
Wacklessness-thug
Vote=thug

and that.....is...word.