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ok let's try a breakdown shall we?
this bitch is a pussy
cant get pussy so he eats carpet
not metaphorically he actually eats carpet
dicks a ryder, hes a pussy carpet eatin fake ryder
thugzdontcry, though u will wen i make u die
and make u fly through the air like an aeroply[ane]
^^Let's see
line 1=wack
line2=gay
line 3=no flow, gay.
line 4=wack.
lline 5=aeroply????lol
Overall=wackest verse I've ever seen 0.5/10 i give you half a point for trying, lol.
Dont talk shit u so bad i dont even know why i waste this spit,//
Herbs,fags,homo's,pathecic catagories were u fittin in perfect//
U aint big u a fukkin little fake ignorant bug wit a blue smurf-neck//
^^pretty good flow here although not a hard punch.
U a fukkin nerd no friends u socially disturbed and that is life word//
^^lol, laugh points.
Fo real u one eleven, ..couldnt come close to ill suckin dick 24/7//
^^ok finisher, kinda blah.
Overall-bad verse, but you dont need more then this to win.3/10
Punches-thug
Flow-thug
Wordplay-thug
Wacklessness-thug
Vote=thug
and that.....is...word.
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