First off, just a little spelling corrections.
Elegance
Rivaling
Direction
A couple “theirs” should have been they’re
Pleading

“Born genesis, mother natures surrogate Sun is Tomorrow”
-I think this was from Cam’s? They weren’t labeled, but going by style and all, I think this part was Cam’s. Anywhoo, great line, that’s the type of thing that makes me happy to have you in WP.

“Insatiable hunger causes me to stumble and fall
Third season before winter, killing hope for us all”
-This is the reason your one of my favourites, that’s word…perfect. LoL
”my time slips through cold hands on the digital clock”
Metaphuking amazing.

Great work you two.
*Strikes One Up For WP’s Dopeness*