'An Open Mic Piece'

at first i saw the title i was like WOA! Heeeey Macarena! but good thinkin for the title...

Well the piece, it has a nice flow, ...u used some nice vocab aswell,...the concept was rather new, i cant recall seein somthin like this, ...I like the twists in it, ...bout the comic ''marvel....real nice thought off,....kinda reflects real life i think^^^....mostly Rb,....Thinkin they it''incredible''....back to the concept, i really think it was a nice concept,not played at all,....very good and well explained by u, ....and i think its olso a kinda off reflection , ...of somone.....u?, Real nice drop consistent, ...no chops, ....real nice

8,5/10

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