no doubt showing that skill man...
You're flowing pretty well here, and you got strong vocab...
No disrespect, but in my opinion, it's a good thing you left this short... cause I would've gotten boring after a while... it's got good wordplay and all... but some ain't gon' feel it too much... to me it seemed nice... it would sound hot in audio... but it gets a bit monotinous... know what I'm saying? maybe not... lol...

Peace man