ah man... too simple, too short...
I'm sure those two were freestyles...
the concept of that first one wasn't that bad...
who don't want to talk about what they living through, or lived through right? the streets where one came from and shit... thas cool... but it wasn't interting cause of the simplicity and shortness of this... need to up alot of shit... vocab, flow, wordplay... all that...

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