iight

AngellicalR was right you were lucky with this piece, it could have destroyed the whole piece with one flaw

it was happy up beat piece, ( not to many of those around ) but im starting to see more and more of them, which is good, cause even thou life does deal out some hard shit, it does give us wonderful happy things also, like true love

i felt you lacked in vocab, it was pretty plain, but the topic was put in a new view. your picture coudl have gone into more depth i thought, but it was still a good piece

thou i have to say once again i agree with AngellicalR, you should have kept the piece going form here, woulda been nice

my love

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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