iight

i hear the message i see its purpose but thats bout it

not much to it, doesnt look like much effort went into it, draw me a picture, make me feel it inside me, make it start ideas in my head that leave me thinking about the idea all day ( or at least for a few minutes ) there just wasnt anything to it.

put some more emotion into the next, and more time, think about things and make them longer, theres not many poems that are that short that make it to be great pieces of work, but it has been done thou.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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