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whoa..you came nice in that peice,
the flow was great, the vocab was wored perfect i thought, how the structure was it seemed everything fit in the right plass, good peice i liked this the best...
"And as this Sonnet Unfolds, He'll Attempt his Vent on Peace,
thunderous Footsteps will Awaken the city that Never Sleeps"
i thought that had a great vibe to it, and the start and finish..those were also really dope i thought..all in all man 9/10...check out my punk ass collab lol...its called Book of rhymes" with puglist...thanks amn good drop
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