i loved reading this. you showed me the intro before and i said it was dope.. actually reading the verse that followed the beginning opened my eyes. i wasnt really a comic book fan, but this captured my interest through your vivid imagery, and your incredible vocab. i thought the love and lost, paid the cost lien was corny, but it did fit well with the piece. i guess all we can do now is just count how long it takes for someone to nominate it into the rb legends.

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