^ Lmmfao! Replying for votes is gay. .

This wasnt bad for a keystyle, strong flow, good use of internals and multi's, the topic had been worn out by now, many many times has it been done but still, you made this your own, a lot of emotion pent up but i always had the feeling you could of got it out better if you'd of worded each line slightly differently. Writers voice wasnt as strong as it needed to be to really carry this piece, vocab was there, wordplay in the last line was old though - i used a similar line almost a year ago when the single first came out, lol.

Short and to the point, there wasnt a lot here to criticise, try writing a longer, extended piece to a harder, original subject - that way we'll get to see what your capable of.

Eace-Pay!

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