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Old 09-16-03, 08:59 PM   #5
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Ok I think that a battle like this can only be voted on in a bar by bar breakdown

Chrit-

I know ya like my avvy... But thats another type of being hard/
Chrit about to show Thugz how to address a Father's Day card/

^^creative opener....not the best but pretty good.

We know its coming... thats why we turn our heads when you spit/
Verses of bullshit... Beating you to the punch faster than the kid who spiked it/

^^ok, wasn't feeling this too much.

Open mic addicted??? Cause even with my help your battles aint sick/
Pathetic dick... I knew you were wack when you tried posting text on soundclick/

Set up was aight, very nice punch.

Constant PM's to me... asking for favors... you aint my dog... just a pup/
The alphabet's shrinking dun down to 25 cause Chrit just ate U up/

^^holy shit, nice fuckin punch, more creative then any bar I've seen in a while.


Fucking herb's reality is flawed... after all that alias lost to youngblood/
Thugz is so wack he couldnt get airplay joining the mile-high club/

^^setup was a nice personal, lol@the punch, very nice finisher.

Overall-near perfect verse, creative as hell, nice shit dawg. 9.5/10

Thugz-
Chrit why u thinkin this is real war?all the crews u lookin for shelter and tryin to hide//
Man^stop actin like a kid join one crew, make up ur fukkin mind and just dicide//

^^blah, didn't like this opener.

Dun matter tho cuz i spit, fareinheigt leevin u'r eyes scorches in celcius degrees//
If i build a club from wet cardboard i would still have a better bar structure than u Jeez//

^^stretched, but decent punch.

My malicious-scriptures will viciously-crush-u,face it the tables have been turned//
Hehatemeblah!....What? try to make sence man,ur writins simalar to a dictonary thats been burned//

^^once again, kinda stretched. Decent punch still, but get to the point quicker.

But the main issue is that i rip u'r shit quicker then anorexic bitches on laxatives//
U a broke slut wit blank fukkin shells and you think you put mac-in-this?!?//

Pretty good punch here.

Duper herb suits u why? cuz alter ego's tellin what u always was and wanted to be//
Cryptic serves u well to, touchin ur ego 'roommate?nah 'u',wit untouched rec to make u The real gangsta net C/

^^setup was ok, bad punch, far too stretched, I was reading it like "Damn, when's this line going to end", know what I mean?

Overall-I've seen much better from you. Technically speaking it wasn't a bad verse, punches were ok. However, you took way too long to get to the point, as I said before. Ok verse, but not nearly good enough to win.7/10

Vote=Chrit