Oohhhhh..........Lil mami got Skills

First of all this piece was HOT..........U came out iLL..........U had clever wordplay........Ur Multies were good.............Vocab was down though , this piece was simplistic but still tight....Nice content and all...But next time try to come up wit a better concept to spit about...........This concept was just freestyling , u didnt have any topic...........Next time come up wit a topic
to spit about................U got skills fam......Both verses were strong....U kinda fell off in some parts.......But you still gotta elevate though.........U got potential , U got tha skills........Just elevate on your metaphors , vocabulary and multies.....Try to make ur open mics longer.....And never put a tittle like what u did.....Next time try to figure out what this piece was about...And put down a tittle relating to it......Like u could have named this piece......" My Intro " or " Lyrically Insane " , sumthin in that department........I am looking forward to read more open mics from u.....................And one more thing.............WE GOTTA COLLAB..........lol