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Old 09-16-03, 10:39 PM   #14
Young P
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~Young P~ fully breakin dis shit down for ya'll niggaz

Miraculous One says:
Bishop's sig says "I'm startin over, no more games", so u stopped the dicking?....
Banned already now he commin back for more, he's probably addikted to RB clicking.....
Good first line but not much of a 2nd...ok personal-6/10

Youngblood, banned for dicking urself? This new name surely wont get u far.........
If you startin over atleast stop with the loving of Pac, everyong knows who u are.....
Another personal...not real impressive-5/10

Gotta get ya rec back up so he took a page outta Buffy's book n started the newb slayings....
Think it was really hard to tell it was you, going "....yep.....pz....." ur usual gay ass sayings.......
Pretty nice... feelin da personals... 8/10

Expose your true nature, just go back to your gaybars and ask for a hit of dick.....
Cuz I seen ya previous record, too many d/r's dont think your lines were ever sick......
Kinda elementary... personals again-6/10

Took a couple days to get ya IP changed? Back wit avengence with ya prewrittin notes....
Illiterite faggot, cant read a verse, that why to close battles he always quoted votes......
Liked da finisher and good personal-9/10

Overall-Filled with personals but not real great punches or flow... werdplay, multis, and metas need work... 34/50... 68%


Bishop says:
~MO~ RB don't want ya, be read ta catch four knees//
Kid couldn't take a hint, if I was giving clues for free//
Nice use of multi...ok first line, betta 2nd-7/10

Why spit close ta 20?, your verses aren't worth three bars//
Cuz ya punches are more disappointing than the birth of retards//
Lol...good one...sounds played yet i neva seen it before...lol-8/10

Quit ya cryin slut, or i'll punch ya pupils till ya eyes erupt/
Cats say I’m taking this battle..n' they aint been lyin much/
Lil too elementary...givin it a-5/10

Straight offing haters, Watch how quick MO gets his neck split/
Throat'll become an escape hatch with his blood rushin' to exit//
Oh shit... very nice line...-10/10

I’m always paired with wackness, or someone dumb as him//
I see ya got many styles, well I guess illness isn’t one of them//
Not a great closer...could be betta...ok personal tho-6/10

Decent flow, good multi's and meta's... pretty good punches but not enuff personals....work on that... 36/50 72%

Winner and Vote-Bishop

No... you two were friends when he was youngblood... DR vote.
-Amby
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