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lol................man this takes me back.............hard to put into words such a unique and life changing feeling.............i like the approach and format too...........felt like you were talking to me.......deep and romantic at the same time............it is not easy to write a free word type piece so my respect in that regard.....i would like to see you expand on this particular thought a little more imagery would have helped but maybe this is a build up to something greater.......congratulations to you on your journey into love and good luck as well trust me you'll need it........lol.......1
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