i say way to rep ya city...........also tossed in some stuff about 9-11.....would have liked to see you expand a little bit.........plus i think maybe with the title and all you should have made every verse a different aspect of new york.........9-11 for the first verse...the different hoods there..........maybe something about it being the birthplace of hip hop etc.................there was good flow but i think you watered down your vocab to get your point across.........i think you should change around the chorus a little too..........instead of:::::

Chorus:New York, New York City
We still here, and we ain't never left

maybe::::::::

Chorus:New York City, New York
We still here, and we ain't never left


this was a pretty good piece all in all homie...........i see your skill as a topical writer keep doing ya thang...............1