I liked the first one just cause something like that happened to me. This girl I used to live near was a very good writer and I read stuff she had about another guy. It blew me away. I tried getting her to write about me but couldn't do it. It's ok though, she was a distraction. Honestly, if I hadn't been in the same situation I probably wouldn't have cared much for that writing. There wasn't a whole lot to it but I did like it cause you got me remembering.

Scared and Alone is what I thought of when reading the 2nd one. Who hasn't felt like that? Like the first one, there wasn't much to this but it got me thinking about times I felt like that. Makes me appreciate where I am now.

For being such short and simple writings they kinda had a punch to them, in my opinion. I thought they were pretty good but next time you write put more into it.