ok i will break this down
Funda-
Aiyo, why the fuck am I BATTLIN this HERB-AGAIN?? Whats your NAME-AGAIN?
SARACEN? I'll have you LOOKIN like Nancy CARRIGAN

^^a weak attempt at multi's, seemed too forced, punch was ok, i guess, not too good, blah.

DIABETIC? Then I'll have ya OVERLOADED with PENOCILAN-from my 'sugar' sweet 'punches
Shit kid, I'll have you served like poor kids without lunches
"Vegetarian?"-No? Then why the fuck are you battlin 'herbs' I eat meat and soak your blood-up with sponges!

^^didn't like any of those except the last line, pretty nice punch there, good flow.

Aiyo, so next time you battle me, just remember the plague is contagious
And by battlin me you just caught your first effect of braveness

^^kinda weak finisher, ok.

Overall-weak verse. Didn't see anything impressive. Can't be called "wack" but not good, a few ok punches. 5/10

saracen-
your not a vet,just a herb that posts a lot**,
your wins are against newbies,more often than not,

^^um...ok flow...but....where's the punch?

call that a diss,weak random punches are to vague,
to hit hard,you cudnt be ill if you caught the plague

^^ok personal, didn't hit too hard.

dick riding is Fundamental to u gettin votes,
its not incidental,because theyre all quotes,

^I dunno. I liked this finisher a lot even though it seems basic at first. After you reread it, it becomes more clear. Very nice flow/personal.

Overall-nothing too hard hitting, not too many multi's, but more personals, pretty good verse. You were weak in the opener but then got better. 6.5/10

Punches-fund, just by a hair.
Flow-saracen
wordplay-tie
multi's-fund
personals-sara
metas-tie
vocab-tie
creativity-tie
opener-tie(didnt like either one too much.)
finisher-saracen
favorite line-saracen
dick riding is Fundamental to u gettin votes,
its not incidental,because theyre all quotes,

Vote=saracen

ppl are gonna disagree with me, but i dunno, i was just feeling saracen more.