^wtf.........this wasn't bad seemed like you watered down your vocab a bit but everything was pretty good.............decent topic.......nice intro if you will into the more gritty part of a larger story.......i liked the way it flowed sounds to me like you wrote this for audio the way it read made me want to sing along......lol......what beat did you write this to if any?......might make a difference when you read it...........overalll this was pretty dope.......1