yo... this wasnt a bad peice... you really put some emotion into it, I was feelin it...
you had a basic rhyme scheme... you could have made this a better peice if you made it more comlex...
but your vocab was good and your shit was flowin...
your hook was ok too... so all in all, it was a decent spit...
keep droppin and elevatin homie,
A.T.

checkk my drop called "whats yo deal girl??? (keystyle)"