hmmm where do i start...

this was good but i expecter more from you... the flow was hard as hell to find. the vocab was there but it looked more forced than anything. Dont get me wrong this isnt bad its just im getting deep with my feedback cause your suppose to teach me how to open mic.

You aint at my level of the game you aint even at my stage-The way I sun you will be the dawn of a new age.
Im ahead of you by light years-you rap quers-

^^fav lines... the wordplay was good and this seemed alot better suited to be in a battle...take that how you want... and if u dont like what i said hit me back just as hard on my ONLY open mic to date

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134