It was iight..
there was a lil forced rhyme scheme
and making up words just to rhyme = not good idea, unless your big pun but back to the topic.. it seems that you drifted a lil off course during the writing of it..
basically i have seen better drops from you..
just keep slanging and it will come back
sorry man


can u check out my piece "Fuck The Game, The Rest's The Same"

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