^^ beat me to it
that line is about a switchblade...it does make sense

the flow was kinda rough but it was there, the structure of your piece has to be worked on, try counting syllabuls per line... i heard it works

I like how this was an open mic introducing yourself... iv seen your battled on FL (all 26518258 of them) so i agree with word you will blow up soon enough.. just get that flow problem fixed and your good

dont sleep on this please (not a battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134