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Realest was decent..
The imagery and emotion was there, I think your vocab could use some work but that will come with time.
Now I feel that Titan threw of the verse, no offence. There was a great flow going for Realist and then it got thrown off.
Final Comment: Decent piece, I would like to see Realist continue with it by himself. Titan all you need to do is elevate a little..
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