Yeah, the fourth verse w/ the fifth line is all that really drew me from this piece, it threw your flow as i read it, but content wise this was dope, really nicely worded, strong writers voice, held my attention, i liked this line:

the outside is all thrown away
as you fall into your interiour

^ Really thought provoking, a good metaphor of a metaphor i guess. All in all i liked this, nice my girl = )

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