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Old 09-18-03, 01:53 PM   #12
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martin luther king? dats wat caught my attention
ya flow is a liol choppy? on and off na mean
i dont enjoy ya voice but fuck it its coo
i like the beat but you didnt sound proper on this...it sounds like u rushin words on some parts, like you tried to record your whole verse in one shot, that might cause the rushness
still hear no martin luther king
lyrics are str8 but the laid back emotion is not doin it, need emotion wen talking about pain

ahh i hear him
fuck ive been lookin for a martin luther king smaple too
i hate you lol

overall not bad but ya need to up your personal rhyme scheme, once you do that then your set
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