Thread: The Real Weed
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Old 09-18-03, 03:35 PM   #4
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yeah decent rhymes. the way you only rhyme each word once for most of the song kinda makes the rhyme not flow as well as they could. try to keep a rhyme going for jus a lil longer and you will notice how much better the rhyme sounds keep droppin, workin on it and you'll improve- Peace
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