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A pretty creative topic. I like how you see night time as a moment of safety before the storm. I don't see it the same way but still, it's a nice way to look at it.
The way you wrote this was good. You stayed on topic through the whole thing. It didn't lose my attention at all because of how you were describing things in it. Really nice little uplifting piece.
"A time for problems to vanish like air, away into the abyss,
Where they cannot haunt us again, or forever scare us,"
Those were the lines I liked the most out of it. Keep posting more like this up.
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