Verse by Verse breakdown 3/5 is winner ...
Feeble 1st Bar
im coming to get you, fuck the omens - cuz im through with..
notice who they picked as leader?.. it wasn't you bitch!
(Good personal , not to complex though , pretty simple as an opener , but to the point)
Com 1st bar
I Only Sent Two Ghosts At Christmas Just To Confuse-Ya
Christmas Past And Present… Coz Feeble Hasn’t Got A Future
(I liked this line , funny and a good punch , in one ... foreshadowing the battle perhaps ...we'll see )
BAR 1 vote COM (1-0)
Feebleminded Bar 2
I lost? but as i part the minions in this narc's dominions
all the smart opinions say i beat you from start to finish!
( I would have went for a heavy punch here instead of admitting to a past defeat , basically , you saying , yea you beat me , but people thought I won , well guess what you didn't , why bring it up ?)
Com bar 2
I’ll Abuse-Ya Rip Threw-Ya, This Is War So Stop Ya Feuding
I’m Your Old School Bully You Didn’t Want At The Reunion
( Good wordplay here , nice flow , good followup to opener , funny shit too , bully references are always good , good visual )
bar 2 vote - COM 2-0 overall
Feeble bar 3
i start to win this. . my slate will rip em, i hate his dictum
but this battle means less to me than his latest victim!
( I really dug yur flow on dis one , but thats about it , no real heavy punchs , although it flowed great )
Com Bar3
You’re Losing This Battle With Weak Lines That I’m Soon-To-Dent
I Cause Friction And Heat Like Fucking Ass With No Lubricant
( Funny line , heavy punch )
Bar3 - Tie , Com leads 2-0-1
Feeble Bar 4
traits are liftin - fate is driftin, polls make me grip him
if com's deliverin illness then ima take his shipment!
( once again , your flow is on the money , your shits fun to read , but yu aint saying much of a dish on him , just spraying shit , its cool though )
Coms bar 4
As Soon-As-I-Vent My Anger Your Skill Is Soon-To-Be-Subsided
You’d Think Your Ass Was 50’s Fame The Way Newbies-Wanna-Ride-It
(Nice punch , lines a little stretched , but funny as shit , and a good personal to boot )
BaR 4 - cOM ...........lEADS 3-0-1
fEEbles closer ..........
22 wins & you think ur sumthin i'll sink ya functions
and stop ya flow and illness at the brink of junction
( Aigght shit , but other than good flow and vocab , no punches , no personals ... no dice )
Coms Closer
I Can’t Abide-It, Your Style Is Forged From Other MC’s Spare-Components
Use The Sig I Made Below…..You Might Actually Scare-Opponents
(Cheap tactic with the homemade sig , however Highly effective as I laughed my balls offs )
Great Battle by 2 great Veterans .......... I think Com won it fair and sqaure and gave my reasoning as to why , NO BEEF to either MC , props to both
PeACE crazy E
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