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Old 09-18-03, 05:24 PM   #15
Aisle Phive
AKA Cereal Shelf
 
Posts: 1,852
From: New Jersey
IP:

funda, work on your flow and some of your punchlines. ur flow was off alot. saracen it took me 5 seconds to finish reading your verse, it was weak, no punches, weak personals, good flow, but overall very weak for such a short battle.

vote- FUNDA

he just came better.. PERIOD.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3171#post783171

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79906

vote honestly, break down my battle wit street a little bit, and dont just vote for him cuz some other ppl did..
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