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Old 09-18-03, 07:02 PM   #19
Aisle Phive
AKA Cereal Shelf
 
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From: New Jersey
IP:

good battle by both emcees. but B2K had the better verse by a good portion. bar structure was nice to read and the piece flowed pretty well. rappad ur flow was way of and many of the punches were a weak attempt at wordplay..

fav line from B2K

Cuz I pluck ya vision tools in the livin room to leave ya win den-eyed...
Then give ya a spin so ya dizzy spittin to ensure I top ya rhyme.

very nice line^^^

Have your text write in portions, when "I bring out the kid in ya" like abortions/

played but still your best line ^^^

good battle.. but vote.. B2K


hit these two up..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80309

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79906
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