This one was very much written within yourself. By that i mean written to personal understanding. Very few 'hands' in this piece which you can grab hold of and guide you...

Still, i found it fairly interesting. I found some of the lines quite striking. Though in my own way more than yours. I didn't dig too deep into the piece. Though it's obvious that's what you have to do with this piece. but still, to an extent, appreciated...

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