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Old 09-18-03, 08:58 PM   #8
NewPort
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Ight I'll Be The First To Lay It Down..

Cam..

Son.. That Shit Was, To Put It Simply.. Amazing..
I Loved That Shit Thru N' Thru.. Honestly. The Whole
Thing Was Thourough.. On Topic.. And Felt Fully


Opener - Above Average
Use Of Vocab - Excellent
Flow - Above Average
Metaphores - Average
Topic - Excellent
Creativity - Excellent
Depth - Excellent
Finisher - Excellent

Overall - Excellent

Bribe

I Liked This Piece.. You Were Consisent
Throughout The Topic For The Most Part.. On Key
With What You Had To Say, and It Had Decent Flow.
Was Really Feeling Your Finishing Line Her Too
Could Have Worked On The Depth A Little More..
But None The Less.. Good Piece Here..


Opener - Average
Use Of Vocab - Average
Flow - Above Average
Metaphores - Average
Topic - Average
Creativity - Above Average
Depth - Average
Finisher - Excellent

Overall - Average