Nice drop dawg.......U're getting better....I like your style , your rhyme scheme was blazing in this piece.............Your chorus was iLL.....Nice shit dawg..........The first verse was tight......Your structure was Nice......The second verse was again tight.....U never fell off , you kept the paste going.......U kinda lacked vocabulary in this piece...But the way u played wit your words made up for it......So overall: 7.9/10......You lost the 3 points because u lacked vocabulary.............Return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80376