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Old 09-18-03, 11:03 PM   #11
J.Dubya
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Metaphores - tie
Vocabulary - stw (more complex)
Punchlines - stw (harder hitting)
Wordplay - stw (better use of words)
Creativity - stw
Personals - neither (none used)
Structure - ce (nice and even)
Opener - stw (hot as hell)
Finisher - stw
Multies - ce
Flow - ce (shorter lines/kept in smooth)
Overall - stw (6-3)

Highlights
CrazyE:
-Amazingly yu managed a few wins on this site
But , like mama says , two wrongs dont make a (pre)"write"

ShockthaWorld:
-You think u raw? bitch i'll leave ya bodyframe Stitched wit Scars/
-I doubt you'll land a punch but throw a Few-If-You-Dare/
Cuz The only time your"OUT-STANDING is when u Lose-In-Musical-Chairs/
Cause Vomittin KitKats the only time this kid Sick wit Bars/