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Originally posted by J.Dubya
Metaphores - tie
Vocabulary - stw (more complex)
Punchlines - stw (harder hitting)
Wordplay - stw (better use of words)
Creativity - stw
Personals - neither (none used)
Structure - ce (nice and even)
Overall - stw (6-3)
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ShockthaWorld:
-You think u raw? bitch i'll leave ya bodyframe Stitched wit Scars/
-I doubt you'll land a punch but throw a Few-If-You-Dare/
Cuz The only time your"OUT-STANDING is when u Lose-In-Musical-Chairs/
Cause Vomittin KitKats the only time this kid Sick wit Bars/
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