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Old 09-19-03, 02:01 AM   #2
Mr.Christensen
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lol i had a whole feedback done... then i saw it was your sig...

good rep of Boogie Down

while the structure on the screen looked all off the flow was easy to find. quick suggestion: dont repeat the same phrase again like u did 2 times

jah fortunate lickity spit cataclysm that my genre emits/
niggas quit and bit the style/
but check ive been doin this for a while/
when i say bit the style/
i mean the false accusations/
talkin bout pimps and hoes but aint tryin to save the nation/
if your nations jail i got the bail/


nationg and bit the style.. doing that makes you look bad

'sides that it was a good drop kid! and just put the whole song on your sig while your at it... kidding

good drop

if you would be so kind *not a battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
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