WOW that was like a 5 minute read...

1st verse - fire... i love the number use.. espically that bar with 2... multies kinda lacking but wordplay, vocab and flow more than made up for it
Hook - i felt it could have been better i couldnt find the flow or the rhymes
2nd verse - not as good as the 1st to me... once again the multies lacked, and it seemed you were running out of steam cause a few lines seemed forced

You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter-and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter.

good internal rhymes but it seemed forced to me

over all great drop kid...
p.s. dont i see you on like every open mic i respond on...

If you would be so kind *not a battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134