its was a comical way of saying it but fucked up non the less

the flow was easy to find and i read the piece without a problem
the way she bit her lip is just like my ex.. but thats a different open mic...

the rhyme scheme you kept to was simple becuase your story was more important.. the vocab was good as was the imagry
good drop sir!

if you would be so kind
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