interesting concept crazy ass plot twist at the end. the flow was cool the vocab was a little watered down but you used a storytelling format so that is to be expected.

She started kissin on my neck, and asked me if I had protection
I said yeah, but what i should have said was "stay away from my erection"
Right away she started undressin, my eyes were stuck on her like glue
She helped me take of my shirt, and started kissin on my tattoo
She had the body of a nymph, there was not the slightest imperfection
She had mirrors all over her room, so i could see every point of reflection

^i love this part the first two lines showed he was uncomfortable and yet still deep down wanted to stay the second part just made her look like a freak. and i hope this isn't a true story that would make you r. kelley. lol. just playing dawg good drop