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Chrit:
You are probally the only one who can make a hardcore type of style work on the internet. Your whole verse came out dope, every line was on point. This line stuck out for me, i really felt you here.
Is it so hard to think of a poor white kid from the street...
Who felt the heat... Who was forced into stealing to eat...
G.Hod:
Very easy read, your flow is outstanding, along with your structure. Your verse was very deep in emotion, I like how there was a great change in styles. Your verse was placed well in this collab.. The line i thought that grabbed me the most:
A wonder of life, the thunder is light - as my lantern kept us patient
We've plundered our sight in fears of dreaming; is the answer deprivation?!
Sureal:
Your flow and vocabulary were superb, really worked on this I can see. I like the short line style you were using for this piece it fit well. Line that i got grabbed by:
Intoxicated Dreams, From Ignored To Extreme.
Childish NightMares, Full Of Weary Screams.
Final Comment
Overall: great collab, all three of you came strong with good flow / vocab / imagery.. keep this up and ill be expecting more from all of you..
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