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Old 09-19-03, 05:07 PM   #13
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Alright...how can i break this down.

*thinks*





I got it... Ill start with Chrit.

Chrit's verse was more into the whole not fitting in the soceity. Aspect of racism flowed from his words. Reflected discrimination is still at the corner of our an empty space in our minds. Poverty is upon the grasp of most people. Giving them the reason to do un acceptable things and making scrambled decisions. YOur perspective introduction throughout the whole piece was incredible. COnstructed simple words derived from reality came out great. Sometimes when u look in front of a mirror. Your image is blurry. You can ask me why..Chrit. Your a HOE!..
....maybe your sleepy.


Who's next? Oh yeah..G-HOd

...Middle part can sometimes be sketchy at times ..I know it wasnt arrange based on anything...but yours came really strong...the idea with yours was about the stress that comes and goes in a persons life. It seems retractable...depending on how you would see it as a perfect interpretation with images being so selfishly deformed and questions storming asking whats wrong. THe fact that youve used deep sensational terms aspired your part and perspectives to be totally upgraded and different. You acquired a skill where you can make a topic deeper than what it seems.


And of course...last but not the least....

Sir Eel..

...Very much uniquely done. The scraped images and terminology combined through reality. Your vocab was really good. The idea from your part..was about seeing past through the present and future. THe dimensions of experiences that mustve been cause so much hurt and pain that would retiredly ended up being blurry. Left to right and top to bottom vaguerously awesome.


OVERALL

...From the INtro about life then ending with somewhat death-like ending came together with this collab. Great Piece.
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