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first off aloha to rapbattles

and the piece:

it was short seeming i admit with the rest of them, should dig deep inside you find those feelings you didnt know where there and add some more depth and feeling to it ( try to make me cry coz i feel and relate to the piece and it brings back such strong pics )

It had a great flow to it, i never once became lost in your words, and i could tell the message of what you were saying, just put more emotion in it

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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