Not bad my man. .
short and to the point, the topics been done numero unous times before, but this was decent for whats there, good content, vocab's pretty good, nice use of multi's and internals to get the piece done, flow was a little rickety in some areas, but nothing major.
Not really a lot to critique, but welcome to WP and i hope you learn from me.


Oh, make your bars even, hoe. it looks better presented.

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