yo this is a good drop, im feelin the concept. but man!! its hard to read man! its hard to find where the rhyme is, how you intended it to be flowed and therefore i didnt enjoy it as much as i could have. please set it out on seperate lines next time!. keep droppin cause i can tell u can write. please check out my new drop- history (african Dreams) thanx

p.s. the whole african dreams- american dreams thing wasnt intended

Peace