it was okay, but try not to write like a PARAGRAPH type shit, hard for someone to catch ya flow and ppl will genuinely get lost reading it


drop ur shit like dis

Pressure and stress on every hour of my day
I'm booked solid t'ill the end my days
and most of that'll be spent workin' for shitty pay
or forcing myself to restrain the urge to relay
~verbalities...........

like that, bar format

neways, nice drop