Wow... I came to three discoveries. One, I could have sworn I already replied to this. I know I read it, I just must not have pushed the "submit reply" button.

Two, when I'm serious, I actually do tend to sound very condenscending and errounious... just like varentao.

And three... that tongue cutting line just made me cringe. I think that maybe the first, if ever, I ever had a physical reaction to poetry. Well... except for the sexual ones, but that's a different kind of reaction.

Anyway, this was awe inspiring all the way around. The only technical problem was when I read it the flow seemed a bit off. Certain lines longer/shorter then the others. But besides that it's good stuff.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.